Post 8-Essay Revising

The essay I chose to review is my close-reading essay. I think this essay a low, maybe low-plus. It has the basics that every essay needs, but it lacks in many areas. I think that it doesn't flow as well as I could make it. It has choppy transitions and parts from paragraph to paragraph as well as relating some points to other points in the paragraphs. I can work more on using more quotes and utilizing the sources better. I think the paper lacks in the support area using resources, and it would help if I added more information to help support my argument. I need to work on unpacking the quotes as well, which would also help support my argument. Overall it has a purpose and is fairly organized, but I believe it needs to be reworked in terms of the transitions and I need to add supporting quotes and work on unpacking those quotes to get the most out of them.